Band 8 Letter |A Letter To Your Employer Requesting A Transfer

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Your company has opened a new branch in other country. Write a letter to your manager requesting him a transfer to this new office.

  • Write how you will be suitable in this new office
  • What kind of job will you be interested in the branch?
  • Ask a few questions regarding work in this new branch

Band 8 IELTS Letter Sample

Dear Mr Ali,

I am writing to express my interest in working at the recently opened Sudanese branch of our company.

As you know, I have the required qualifications and experience to work in the new branch. I am from Sudan so I will be able to communicate with local businesses more effectively because I know some of them personally.

I am very interested in working as a liaison officer because I believe that I will be able to coordinate the company’s work with local businesses. I have a wide range of relationships with local businesses and entrepreneurs.

By the way, I have got some questions about work in the new office. Will the working hours be the same as here? And what about the remuneration? Can I expect a rise? Do you provide accommodation for staff posted there?

Thank you for your time and consideration.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours Faithfully


Manjusha Nambiar

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