Band 8 IELTS Letter Sample | Letter To Your Manager Asking For Their Comments On Your Article

Write a letter to your manager and ask for his/her comments regarding the article which will be published in a famous magazine next month. In this letter, you should say:
– What have you written the article about?
– Why did you write it?
– What makes it so special?

Band 8 IELTS letter sample

Dear Ms. Sarah,

I am writing this letter to request your feedback on my article written for ‘WorkSafe’ monthly magazine. I should submit this article by next week and it will be published in the upcoming issue. The article is about the fire mishap that occurred in our office last Saturday. It also discusses some effective and cogent measures that we took to control the fire although we are not professional fire fighters.

As you know, the incident became the talk of the office, though it’s a minor accident. So I felt it is necessary to create awareness among the common public, since this could happen in any workplace, and not just in the IT sector. To me, the article is unique because it discusses the utilitarian solution we applied and that is vividly depicted along with the photos of the live incident. I believe this will be useful to anyone who reads it.

Therefore, I would like you to go through it carefully and provide your valuable comments to improve it further.

Looking forward to hearing from you

Yours Sincerely,

XYZ