Band 8 essay sample: The internet should be controlled
IELTS Essay prompt
Some people believe that the internet should be regulated. Others are against any forms of internet censorship. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The internet gives us access to limitless amounts of information. There is no denying the fact that it exposes us to both ‘good’ and ‘bad’ content. Some people believe that the internet should be regulated and censored. Others disapprove of any kind of censorship because they feel that the internet is a vent through which the oppressed can express their opinion.
Supporters of internet censorship argue that the internet has content that might be inappropriate for certain people. For example, they don’t want children to be exposed to the online terrorist propaganda or pornographic materials. This is indeed a valid point. The internet does host lots of materials that are inappropriate for young children.
However, many people do not regard this argument as legit. In their opinion there are several ways to block inappropriate content. Parental control software is one of them. It is quite effective and allows parents to control the content their children access online. In fact, parents can exercise the best form of control by simply moving the computer to the living room. This way they can keep a tab on their children’s online activities.
Some totalitarian governments use the inappropriate content argument for their benefit. They censor the internet to suppress their opposition. In my opinion, this cannot be tolerated at all. Governments that control the internet are merely demonstrating their inability to manage their affairs. They are afraid of their people and don’t want their opinions to be heard. National security is important but it cannot be at the expense of freedom.
To conclude, I firmly believe that there are no valid grounds for internet censorship. I sincerely hope that governments around the world will understand this and stop censoring the internet.
Hello, Miss Manjusha, I’ve just read the essay and have some doubts about whether it is appropriate for IELTS, or not. Talking about pornographic content and the opinion that is strictly negative and furthermore does blame the government, having no proofs or claims. If you can, please tell me if it’s OK to write this kind of essay for writing task 2
There is absolutely nothing wrong with that essay. It is not about pornography or terrorism. It does not support or promote porn or terrorist activities. It merely says that the existence of inappropriate content on the internet is a reason to control it. What is wrong with that?