Band 7 essay samples: Flights have become cheaper. Is this a positive development?

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Essay prompt

In some countries flights have become much cheaper compared to other forms of transportation. Some people think this is a good development, while others are concerned about this situation. Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

Student’s response

Today’s world requires faster connectivity. For sustainable economic growth it is the need of the hour that people and business can connect without any delay. The aviation industry has realized the need and reduced the rates of the flights that they operate. Obviously this has helped many people but critics also see a few pitfalls in this trend.

Globalization has brought countries closer. Businesses in one country are getting merged or acquired by businesses in other countries at increasing rates than before. Students from one country are studying in other countries. Cheaper flights are really proving to be a boon in such scenarios. It helps businesses and supports rapid economic growth. Along with this the aviation industry is also on a high growth trajectory.

However the advantages of cheaper flight come with some disadvantages too. With cheaper flights traditional transport modes will lose their sheen. A big section of the society derives their employment from industries associated with traditional mode of transports. In country such as India, Indian Railways is the second largest public sector employer. If people use railways less and less, serious questions arise on the future of these people. Secondly, it is also important to note that the world is facing increased terrorist activities and in recent years we have observed many attempts to sabotage flights. Increasing use of airways, expose us to such risks too.

Considering all the pros and cons of the situation, I am of the opinion that we should continue with the trend. Government and authorities should encourage the aviation industries to reduce the flight rates further. At the same time risks associated with security and employment should be dealt with strategic intent. Governments can declare some sops for the traditional modes of transport and help them become more competitive. People associated with them can be trained to work in other industries. The security regarding flights should be enhanced. All these measure will ensure a balanced growth.

To conclude the future lies in faster connectivity and shorter distances. The earlier we realize this the better the benefits.