Band 7 essay sample

The following essay was written by one of our students. There are hardly any grammar mistakes in this essay; however, the student has difficulty using complex sentence patterns. Most sentences are simple. Still, this seems to be band 7 or 7.5 to me.

Essay topic

What are the advantages and disadvantages of online communication?

Sample essay

We are living in the 21st century. There are many people who use online communication tools like Facebook, Gmail and Yahoo. Online communication is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages and disadvantages.

Nowadays people like online communication because there are many advantages. The rates are cheap. It uses modern technology. You can just fire up Skype or another communication app on your laptop and do video chat. These days we can communicate with our relatives through email which reach the recipient immediately. We can also send pictures and videos online. They help to maintain our relationships.

Online video chatting also helps us to interact with new people and make new friends. For example, my younger brother who lives in the US regularly sends us photos through email. We also do video chat over Skype. Though we are living in different countries we stay in constant touch.

Some people, however, say that online communication is not good enough. In their opinion, there are many disadvantages to it. For example, some people use fake identities online for cheating others. They make friends with innocent people and often cheat them. There are also people who hack online apps. They steal passwords and other information. Hackers create a lot of problems all over the world.

To conclude, online communication has both advantages and disadvantages. However, in my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. I feel that people should not misuse this communication tool. In addition, the government needs to form laws to protect the privacy of people engaging in online communication.

Manjusha Nambiar

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