A Letter To College Magazine About Need To Improve College Cafeteria

You eat at your college cafeteria at lunch time every day. However, you think it needs some improvements. Write a letter to the college magazine. In your letter

  • Explain what you liked about the cafeteria
  • Say what is wrong with it
  • Suggest how it could be improved

Here is a letter on this topic submitted by one of our students. Send us your writing samples for a free band score estimate or get a detailed analysis of your writing for a fee.

Sample IELTS letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a regular customer of our college cafeteria. While I like most things about it, I really feel that there is some room for improvement. For example, there is an urgent need to add more vegetarian dishes to the menu.

Like most students in our college, I like the ambience of our cafeteria. It is spacious, neat and clean. Also, the items on the menu are delicious and easy on the pocket. However, I feel that there aren’t enough dishes for vegetarians. I am a vegetarian and I have become tired of eating the same rice and sambhar for lunch. While I absolutely like it, I would really appreciate some variety. I know I am not the only student feeling this way. Actually, many students have already started eating in the restaurants outside the campus. I am sure they will happily return to the cafeteria if more veggie items are added to the list. I also feel that the menu should have an equal number of South Indian and North Indian delicacies.

I hope this letter will encourage the management to improve the menu.

Yours sincerely

Karthik

Manjusha Nambiar

Hi, I'm Manjusha. This is my blog where I give IELTS preparation tips.

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