Your company changed to a new uniform. While you like it, there is still something that could be improved about it. Write to your company manager and say

– Why do you like the new uniform?
– What could be improved about it?
– Suggest a way how it can be done.

Here is band 8 IELTS letter on this topic submitted by one of our students. Need help with writing? Get your writing samples corrected by me.

Band 8 IELTS letter sample

Dear Sir,

I am writing to suggest some improvements to the new uniform which we received yesterday. Although the uniform is up to the mark and I like it very much, there are a few areas which could be improved. What I like the most about this uniform is that it is comfortable and stylish.

I can wear this all day while working without feeling / experiencing any discomfort. Moreover, the design of this uniform makes it appealing and sweat proof unlike the old uniform which made us sweat all day.

However / even so, in my opinion, there is still enough room for improvement. For example, it would be better if we could add 2-3 pockets to it. This is because as construction workers we have to carry a lot of tools with us. So, if you could add a few more pouches to our office attire, it will be easy for us to work more efficiently. I request you to talk to the designer so that he can come up with a way to incorporate more pockets into the uniform. Alternatively, we can order an extra jacket which contains 2 to 3 pockets on the outside.

Thank you for your time and support.

I hope you will consider my suggestions.

Yours sincerely

ABC

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